I played the demo on itch.io, great fun! I got stuck after the symbols puzzle, as I couldn’t find the key for the grate in the kitchen. I may have put 20-or-so minutes into just that one step, so it wasn’t for lack of trying.
Below are the notes I took while playing.
Love the music and character designs, very cute and likeable
Coherent style and theme, and pretty distinct too. Even recently, I’ve paid for games with less character than this.
Good text, well written, nice and compact.
I like the card game - simple, easy to understand, but still allows for interesting problem-solving.
have you considered / tried having the camera follow the mouse cursor to some degree? Holding RMB felt a little clunky, and I missed some things that were low in frame on first pass
Related to that - is the six-button UI element at the bottom of the screen necessary? It gets in the way of some objects that are low in the frame. If it’s for touch interfaces, it could be optional, or touch input could be gestures
Maybe raise the spoken text, so it’s closer to the speaking character. I found myself looking down at the text box rather than at the fantastic (and animated no less) characters, and I feel they’re the stars of the show. If the game is intended to be voiced in the future, that would alleviate this to some degree
The font is a bit thin, aliased, and often italic, not necessarily the best for reading. Maybe take font inspiration from similar games you love
It would be nice with number keys = pick up card, ie 1 to pick up card in slot 1. Like Slay the Spire, and probably many others
Possible feature - holdable candelabra that casts light and shows the hidden symbols (and other light-related mechanics later I’m sure). Putting / taking down lamps in deco mode can get a little tedious
“Broken lever to deeper dungeon” quest is somewhat unintuitive, I felt stuck trying to find the secret room, then to understand what the blueprint is for, and I never found the kitchen grate key. The quest log could be more helpful / hinty / direct with that quest