Hello,
My game is now done. All the information, alongside the download link, is on the Itch.io page below.
A special thank you to everyone who’s helped me improve over time.
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Your Itch page is very hard to read. There is too much dark text on a dark background.
Hello. Issue should be fixed now. Any other criticism is welcome.
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It’s still hard to read. It may be easier to read if the black and white background were largely transparent. The text and the background still have too little contrast in most areas, and users will still have to strain to read the text.
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Yes, the first paragraph is basically impossible to read.
If you make your text black, then make your BG2 white and set BG2 transparency to something like 50%, it should be much easier to read.
Or the opposite - white text with black BG2, whatever you prefer.
EDIT: Also, you’re asking for feedback for a game that we need to pay for 
sorry, but that’s not how it works. You’re either releasing a free demo or playtest version for people to play and give you feedback, or you’re actively selling the game. If you’re going the second route, then don’t expect anyone here to be interested, it’s not the best platform to market a paid game.
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